Maggie is a theatrical chamber music work of 9 minutes for baritone, narrator, and ensemble. In this piece, the Romantic glorification of female suffering clashes with economic autonomy. Written for fellow musicians of Splendor Amsterdam as a response to Schubert’s Gretchen am Spinnrade.

The Balance Sheet of Tragedy
In the classical canon, the suffering woman is often the most lucrative business model. Goethe’s Gretchen sits at her spinning wheel, heart breaking for Faust. Meanwhile, the audience consumes her grief as an aesthetic delicacy. Maggie refuses this role. Here, the Romantic hero’s ‘burning soul’ is not met with tears. Instead, it is subjected to an audit. The core conflict is not love versus duty, but poetry versus the rent.
This work dissects the myth that self-sacrifice is heroic. The protagonist reads the small print of the social contract before signing. The male hero promises ‘magic’ and ‘eternal devotion’. She, however, sees a bad investment with a high risk of depreciation. The result is a sober celebration of autonomy. A woman who saves herself is a disaster for the box office. She offers no grand death scene. Yet, at least she is solvent.
Musical Iconography: The Acoustics of Debt
The instrumentation functions as a tribunal. Harmonically, the score rejects 19th-century sentimentality. Instead, it employs a transparent, rhythmic tonality. The musical language is direct and objective, devoid of traditional rhetoric. Consequently, the work does not conclude with a dramatic fortissimo. It dissolves into a ‘steady state’: the quiet sound of balanced books.
Vrolijk treats the chamber ensemble as a machine of economic reality, stripping away the Romanticism of the Faust legend to reveal the modern anxiety underneath:
- The Deconstructed Spinning Wheel (The Strings):
The piece opens with a ghostly homage to Schubert’s Gretchen am Spinnrade. The violins (and ensemble) establish a restless, circular motion that mimics the whirring of the wheel. - The Sound of the “Tailored Suit” (High Texture):
To expose the superficiality of status, Vrolijk pairs the metallic ring of the Glockenspiel with violin harmonics. When the text describes Faust’s power (“His magic was a tailored suit”), this texture becomes high, shimmering, and brittle. It captures the “magic” not as something mystical, but as something synthetic—the sound of a shiny surface hiding an empty core. - The Architecture of Reality (The Piano):
The piano acts as the structural backbone, shifting roles to define the dramatic weight:- Colotomic Anchor: It frequently locks into the bass lines, doubling the low strings to create a heavy foundation—the inescapable “gravity” of the rent and the debt.
- Harmonic Wall: In denser passages, it reinforces the harmony.
- Solitary Voice: Crucially, Vrolijk occasionally strips the ensemble away, leaving the piano to play alone. These moments of acoustic isolation act as a spotlight, leaving the protagonist exposed in the dry, unforgiving light of solitary reflection.
- The Anti-Climax (The Ending): Refusing the dramatic fortissimo typical of the Faustian tradition, the work does not end with a bang or a descent into hell. Instead, it dissolves into a “steady state.” The texture thins out into a quiet, rhythmic stasis—representing the sound of books finally being balanced. It is a chilling resolution: the debt is paid, the crisis is averted, but the silence that follows is one of exhaustion, not victory.
For performers
Year:
2025
Duration:
9 minutes
Instruments:
Narr, Bar; glsp.pft;
2vn.va.vc.db
Premiere:
11 April 2026
Amsterdam
Commission:
Splendor
Amsterdam
Category:
6-18 musicians
Language:
English
Lyricist:
Renske Vrolijk
Are you interested in performing this work? Please contact my publisher.
Renske’s sheet music
is published by Deuss Music.